I am a bit lost on map- wise where we are. Personally I can live without the combat result screen for each battle - as long as they are so one sided. Maybe fewer in combat screenshots too. There is no need to write that the Torians built a Hyperion Shrinker and add a screenshot showing just that.
My two cents, but I am just one reader.
I'd go along these lines too, if you want to streamline your report a bit. About Galactic Events / Super Projects I disagree, IMHO the pics & text add nice flavour to the war reportage.
To summarize: Detail level good, just tone down the amount of battle & battle result pics (not every small scrap need its own pair of pics, reserve them for more significant fights), plus adding some kind of location indicator to the galaxy minimap would be a nice touch.