The Drengin Menace - "...and their willingness to use that capability far more ruthless fashion than the Drengin thought possible."

Should probably read, "and their willingness to use that capability in a far more ruthless fashion than the Drengin thought possible."

Alterian Prophecy - "...and DNA tests showed that they were the essentially the same species..."

Remove the first "the" so it reads, "...and DNA tests showed that they were essentially the same species..."

Thank ya!

Please don't think I'm bein' pissy. Jars me outta the story and I want everyone to read 'em in euphoric wonder.

ABIESSENEEEEEEERRRRRR!!!!

My dander is all up in yo' grill again, homeslice!

ICONIAN REFUGE

Second paragraph, fifth line: "...and encouraged the synthetic beings an uprising against the Iconians."

To an uprising? I dunno, it just doesn't read well to me.

Maybe: "...and encouraged the synthetic beings to rise against the Iconians."